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• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) ako215 2007-04-20

  amazing chapter...i was so excited to read this!

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) XTinkerbellX 2007-04-20

  Oh shit.
  I can't wait to read the next chapter.
  I mean,seriously..her and Joe are fighting and now her DAD shows up?
  This is not good.
  But I do love all the drama thats packed into this story...
  It makes it even better.
  You're a very talented writer.

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) JokeMeKisses 2007-04-20

  I love how you set this chapter up! Using the outline of the list of people she pissed off made everything flow so easily together. This story is very originally and all together impeccably written (have I mentioned I'm the worst speller in the world?). Great Work. I can't wait for an update.

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-20

  Can you believe I read and am reviewing this already? Neither can I... I am trying to be a better reader (again).
  
  WOHOOO! The drama has reproduced and now there's dramatic overpopulation (which is gooooood, btw ;) ).
  I wonder if Joe will be able to calm down - even though his reaction is partly understandable - or if someone else will have to play mediator.

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) prettypoizon 2007-04-20

  Holy shit.
  
  I can't remember the last time a story made me cry so much. Like, actually cry, not just a few tears.
  
  The anger was very beautifully captured.

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) poisonedhalo 2007-04-21

  noooo joe! omg why is every1 on her case? she almost got raped!! update soon luv its been a while

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-04-21

  Hell yes Ria, that's what I'm talking about. The depth in this was incredible, the chapter flowed ridiculously well and you're a talented writer, even though you don't know the half of it! You're incredible.
  
  I missed you! Catch up soon? xxx

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) Frenchie189 2007-04-22

  uh oh.
  update soon please.

• A Little More Touch Me

  (#) LOVELA 2007-04-22

  There ya go spreading this glorious writing all over the place! This chapter was awesome with its suspense and drama (which I love). The fight scene at the end was perfect. Both had valid feelings that needed to get vented. Its too bad that tempers had to get in the way. And DADDY = Uh Oh! Update soon! Smooches!

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