Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
Reviews
Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) riaryder 2007-04-21
Oh, dear!!!
If she's really not pregnant, then that can only mean one thing..........eek!
And that's really not good :-(
You've got me all worried now!
On a lighter note, I loved drunk Petra. I wonder why you write drunk women so well? ;-)
And the way their obvious affection for each other is growing is just so sweet.
Lovely work, lady.
And don't you keep me waiting to know if my diagnosis is right (I won't spoil what I think it is)!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-21
oh my crap - oh my jeeze.
holy jamalama.
you rock my life.
(i don't know why ficwad doesn't like telling me about your updates it makes me sad which is why i'm late.)
i can't wait for the update, so many daddy candidate possibilities - update soon!
fabulous job as always.
xxxoAuthor's response
holy jamalama?? OK, I'm alright with that...lolMoving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) lonerstreet 2007-04-21
wow thats a great chapter. can't wait to read the next chapter.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) lonerstreet 2007-04-21
wow i like this chapter. cant wait yto read the next chapter.Author's response
I liked this chapter too....but I like the next one even better...Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-21
holy mackerel!
i cant really thing of anything else to say ..
well besides .. awesome and eek! and woot, keep up the good work. im done being an idiot now.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) luckysgc921 2007-04-21
ahhh! ficwad didn't tell me you updated?! grumble
fabulous chapter darling. loves this story a loooottttttt. But preggers? uh-oh.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) LOVELA 2007-04-22
oh Katy! I think I start all my reviews that way, but you just write sooooo well. I thought that this chapter was amazing! It had the humor and the drama, which I absolutely love!! I really enjoy the interactions between Patrick and Petra in all case scenarios. They way you pick up on the little details in their conversations and thoughts is amazing. ALSO! Thanks for making me cute in this story. I found it way funny about falling in the bathroom because no joke that almost happened to me when I ran into someone I knew at the bar last night. It made me giggle. Smooches and Ratings if I can....
Sign up to review this story.