- The content of the story matches the point of view you've chosen very well. You identification of Reeve as essentially a voyeur is quite insightful.
The little private glimpses that you give into the various characters' lives are all quite endearing. Your descriptions of how characters sleep are believable and intriguing. These are the sorts of things that one doesn't usually think about to wonder about. The second to last paragraph is very insightful although quite simply expressed.
This is a truly enjoyable and interesting story.
- Awww... This was fun and funny. I'm a big Cloud + Tifa fan, so thanks for the fluff.
Thanks for reminding us all that Reeve has a soul. I always thought, as I wantched the FFVII ending sequence, that they should have made one point a little clearer: Midgar was destroyed. That's where Reeve was. Reeve DIES at the end. This 'fic, I think, has a comparable, quiet movement to it.
- Heheh, the tidbits about how each member of AVALANCHE sleeps are quaint and very amusing: I got good chuckles from Vincent, Yuffie and Red. I couldn't help but feel sorry for Cloud; he's so self-abusive.
At the end, I feel both a little sorry and a little happy for Reeve. He's found his place in life, in the group, and in his job--and then not, as you wrote, yet he's cool about it. It's like a neat sort of inner-peace paradox.
Fantastic little fic.
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