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i could write it better than you've ever felt it
6 reviewsi lost motivation for a little while, but i think ive got it back now. so heres a little update, hopefully itll get the creative ball rolling ..
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Dead On Arrival
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-25
No. This can't happen. They need to get back together.Dead On Arrival
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-04-26
So, basically I've been lurking your story for awhile and this chapter DEFINETLY deserved a review..I lalala Loved it!!!!Dead On Arrival
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-26
GAH!
are you trying to kill me?
that was the saddest chapter of life.
ugh it made me want to cry.
fabulous job though seriously - you are an excellent writer.
points for you even though this chpater broke my heart.
xxo.Dead On Arrival
(#) whatkatydid 2007-05-03
Ugh! She's dead right though, Sorry DOesn't Always Cut It.....in fact hardly ever...
Loved your used of descriptive writing here, nice work, sorry I haven't reviewed earlier. xxxx
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