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7 reviewsSometimes the good guys don't win against unstoppable odds. Yuffie Kisaragi and the last stand: before Traverse Town, there was the Planet, and before Sora, there was AVALANCHE. Chapter five; movin...
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But That Was In Another Country
(#) crimsoncookie 2007-04-27
oh. my. god. this made me spend the past whatever choking and laughing and crying because it is -wonderful- and -scary- and makes me long for the game to be this horrible and also terribly relieved that it's not. and yuffie is just... amazing. this hurts so much to read, because it swallows you up in all of the details, and the feelings, and the scary, but you just have to keep reading oh my god. ♥But That Was In Another Country
(#) Faeriegirl 2007-05-09
I laughed loads. I very nearly cried. The way you write is amazing, it sucks you in. I hope you make Tifa survive cos she's in KH 2, man you fused two of my favourite games and did it believably!!! Anyway, the root of all this is I adore it to pieces and you actually have to write more please?But That Was In Another Country
(#) Faeriegirl 2007-05-27
I just read this AGAIN because it is officially my favourite fanfiction EVER and please dear god write more or I will actually die.But That Was In Another Country
(#) Veleria 2007-05-29
I am in awe.
One minute you had me laughing out loud, and my friends looking at me funny.
And the other I felt like crying.
It's moving, insightful and give me more!
...wow...But That Was In Another Country
(#) yumemi 2007-06-06
SO GLAD to see you continue this! And yet again you manage to take a Heartless that in the game is bumbling and kinda silly, and make it horribly malevolent.But That Was In Another Country
(#) TheSeer 2008-07-14
This is amazing. If Yuffie's dialogue had actually been anywhere near this good, in KH or FF 7, they would have been much better games. And it's not just Yuffie. You've gone past "in character" to the way the characters should have been.
The tone, too, is phenomenal. The end of the world feeling, with everyone vanishing, everyone dying, Cloud going crazy, on and on. Your Yuffie's so spastic - usually that's hilarious and then all of a sudden she does something that's so lame it's beautiful, like kissing the microphone. You have a gift. Thank you for writing this.
But fix your formatting, please. I don't know if it's the site or what, but your italics are all screwed up in every chapter. It's distracting from the awesome story.
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