(#) crimsoncookie 2007-04-27oh. my. god. this made me spend the past whatever choking and laughing and crying because it is -wonderful- and -scary- and makes me long for the game to be this horrible and also terribly relieved that it's not. and yuffie is just... amazing. this hurts so much to read, because it swallows you up in all of the details, and the feelings, and the scary, but you just have to keep reading oh my god. ♥
(#) Faeriegirl 2007-05-09I laughed loads. I very nearly cried. The way you write is amazing, it sucks you in. I hope you make Tifa survive cos she's in KH 2, man you fused two of my favourite games and did it believably!!! Anyway, the root of all this is I adore it to pieces and you actually have to write more please?
- This is amazing. If Yuffie's dialogue had actually been anywhere near this good, in KH or FF 7, they would have been much better games. And it's not just Yuffie. You've gone past "in character" to the way the characters should have been.
The tone, too, is phenomenal. The end of the world feeling, with everyone vanishing, everyone dying, Cloud going crazy, on and on. Your Yuffie's so spastic - usually that's hilarious and then all of a sudden she does something that's so lame it's beautiful, like kissing the microphone. You have a gift. Thank you for writing this.
But fix your formatting, please. I don't know if it's the site or what, but your italics are all screwed up in every chapter. It's distracting from the awesome story.
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