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Family Issue
(#) lycus 2007-05-02
Sorry That I Couldn't Review Last Chapter My Computer Kept Freezing,Anyway Unbeliveable Do You Know How Much I Love You Right Now And Can't Wait For Another Story, Belle,Marie Hermione,Ginny And Gabrielle You Really Surprised Me With The Last One And Only Hope That You Surprise All Of Us Readers With Another Incredable Story Even Though Ron Was OOC,You Know What I Mean...Not Really A Rant But HBP Had H/Hr Suffering From Spoild Child Syndrome Harry Wanted A Girlfriend And Hermione Wanted Her Crush Beacause Someone Else Had Them They Became More Appealing Harry Really Didn't Care Until He Saw Ginny And Dean Together And I'm Not Going To Bring Up The Won-Won Thing...Deathly Hallows Is The True End Of Their Childhood Where Jealousy And Crushes Will Have No Place Ron Is Important To Harry, But Hermione Is His Rock His Most Trusted They Will Spend Most Of Their Time Together Hermione To Find The Horcruxes Harry To Destroy Them Ron Will Be Jealous That Is How He Is Hermione Can't Be With Someone Who Will Argue With Her Just To Argue Both H/Hr Are Going To Find Comfort In Each Other Beacause Of Rons' Attitude And Solidify Their Relationship They Saw What Happened When They Didn't Work Together And It Won't Happen Again They Have Too Much Love & Respect For Each Other Thats Why H/Hr Will Happen Can anyone Say The Same For Ron?.Family Issue
(#) wesley 2007-05-02
Awesome, I loved it. I think it was great. I am glad you stuck to your guns and wrote what you intended. I think it worked out perfectly. I liked that little plural mouse spice comment from Ginny, added just a touch of humor without being overboard.
I would like to make a recommend for a small little side fic to this, show how Flint died. Could be an interesting companion piece maybe a single chapter story, worth a think at least?
At any rate, the story was great I enjoyed reading it.Family Issue
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-05-02
OK I do have to say this, it wasn't quite as bad of an ending chapter as some of Dr. T's well packaged died at the age of 165 Harry, yadda yadda yadda chapters, but you did wrap it into a semi-solid ending.
NOW, what do you have planned next, as far as writing goes? Are you going to do anything Harry Potter fiction or maybe a crossover, or perhaps something else entirely. Let me know.
Geovanni LucianoFamily Issue
(#) comp_wiz101 2007-05-02
This story stands as an excellent example of how a skilled author can breath life into the character, and how those characters can take on a life of their own. Well done, bravo!Family Issue
(#) harrysfriend 2007-05-18
Awsome story. I think you are one the best discriptive writers I have read when it comes to sex. Graphic enough start the fire without going so far as to make it corny or unbeleivable. Also used in flow with the story not just to get someones rocks off. All backed by an excellent plot. Good Job. Can't wait for your next one.Family Issue
(#) harrysfriend 2007-05-18
Awsome story. I think you are one the best discriptive writers I have read when it comes to sex. Graphic enough start the fire without going so far as to make it corny or unbeleivable. Also used in flow with the story not just to get someones rocks off. All backed by an excellent plot. Good Job. Can't wait for your next one.Family Issue
(#) slickrcbd 2007-10-12
Wow, this was a great story with a great ending.
I really don't have much else to say, there is nothing negative to put down, and just going on and on singing your praises seems redundant.Author's response
Blush
Thank you. Check out "The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter," also on FicWad.Family Issue
(#) sparky47 2008-08-04
Excellent story, very enjoyable. I was glad to see that Harry didn't turn into a killing machine and the inclusion of Marietta was treat also something different.Author's response
Thank you,
I'm glad people are finding "Family Issue" an enjoyable read. I drew from a lot of personal experience while writing it and it seemed to flow.
N!Family Issue
(#) austrian_shadow 2009-03-03
Hmmmmm....
what to say..... I think that the most I'd want to say ias already mentioned at the last 2 statements here.
I'm realy looking forward to discover more storys from you.
KR
ShadowAuthor's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I have a few stories on this site and some slightly tamer versions on FanFiction dot net.
Danke!
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