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• To Sin Alone

  (#) doc 2005-11-14

  I really enjoyed this smart one-shot of yours. You got the mood down perfectly, and Reno is just so wonderfully... Reno (heh). I like your interpretation of his relationship with Rude, as well. Nice job.

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  (#) SunTyger 2005-11-25

  Wow, this is utterly fantastic! You set the mood wonderfully, and the whole fic comes across raw, gritty, and brutal. I've seen people try to glamorize the Turks, and it ain't pretty--this is a great piece of tellin' it how it is. Love your style!
  
  The only thing I can think of to criticize is the paragraph lengths. This story has a bunch of very short, choppy paragraphs, which does add to the gritty atmosphere, but it might tighten up the piece to consolidate a few of them into longer paragraphs. A short, one-sentence paragraph has serious impact, but if too many of them happen in a row, they start to lose that pound-the-point-home feeling.

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  (#) Rikku142 2005-11-26

  I read this a little while back on LJ and I'm not sure if I left a comment, so I'll do so now.
  
  I really liked this story. It's nice to read something that is to do with Reno that doesn't have him jumping in bed with someone, not that I'm against those fics XD
  
  Very well written,a good subject and nicely handled. Kudos to you.

• To Sin Alone

  (#) CelenaSchezar 2006-03-02

  Very good. The delving into personal concerns is well written. What I mean is, the looking into his own problems, self analyzing... nice job.

• To Sin Alone

  (#) RenoTurk 2006-09-12

  How cool. Love the atmosphere and the idea of him just leaving her there wide eyed. Love it!

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  (#) aiIenzo 2006-12-30

  All right, so, I was cleaning my room and found this story and started to read the first few lines, just from curiousity. And now, ten minutes later, I'm sitting on the floor in front of my computer because my chair is way the hell over there, and your story utterly captivated me to a point where I really didn't care.
  And that was a really long sentence. Sorry.
  What I'm trying to say is that I was so drawn in by your characterization and wordplay that I didn't even realize how uncomfortable I was in my position. You captured everything perfectly and vividly. Excellent, excellent job.
  ...and sorry about my lame review. I'm not so great at them.

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