(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-05-06Wait. Was that it? Ugh, you're confusing me. There better be more. Or, I might have to kill someone.
...but, holy shit. Lincoln bit Gerard, and left a little 'present'? Hol-ly SHIT!!!! I wasn't expecting that. I wasn't expecting Gerard to be such an idiot. ...but guilt is a human emotion, and I guess Gee's just human (a human whose been thrust into a world of vampires and destinies, but a human nonetheless) Oh, man. I love this story so much.
You really write better than you think you do, hunny. Honestly. You write extremely well even at your worst, and I'm not trying to be nice right there. I'm completely serious.
But, yeah. There better be more. Or I might have to bring new meaning to my nickname of AK-47. But, yeah. Great job!
- I was alittle confused in the beginning.
but i got it, and i loved it.
So....unexpected when Gerard got bite, i thought i was going to shed a tear,thank god i didn't i'm in computer class right now, and that would look a little strange.
Anyways your writing is great,
I love your story.
Please update soon.
(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-05-07Oh. Oh, I...I can't...oh. draws in shaky breath I thought...oh. Oh-ho-oh.
I can't form a good comment for that ending. I just...can't. Oh. That's all I'm able to say. My sister wanted to tell me something, but I had to hold up a hand to stop her while I hyperventilated. I'm. Not. Lying.
I seriously hyperventilated. Which wasn't fun. Lincoln killed Gerard, Frank killed Lincoln, and now Gerard's back alive. It was happy. A happy ending.
Oh, man. This is probably the least coherent review I've ever left, but sweet Lord God of the world...this story had left me speechless. I finished the ending seven minutes ago, and started this review two minutes ago. It took five minutes to regain my, like, consciousness. I seriously gaped at the screen for that long.
And then my bank called and I had to answer in the middle of reading this. You should've heard the conversation:
Stupid Telemarketer: Um...can I speak to Marisol? (My mom's name.)
ST: ...uh, does she have a husband I can speak to?
ST: Could I call at a better time?
Me: YES!!!!! frustrated half-yell
ST: D-do you know when that would be?
Me: NO!!!! /GOODBYE/!!!!!!! hang up and run back to computer as fast as I could
Not kidding. I don't I would be able to make something like that up, but man...I scared the shit out of some random bank lady.
That's what you do to me. This is officially my all-time favorite story, BTW. And I've read a lot. I love you, hunny. I really do. Great job. I applaud you.
Author's responseWow. Thanks dear, your comment made my entire month. And man, I wish I could have heard that phone call! xo
(#) isuckatlifen 2007-05-07this story started out intense with a confusing romance between gerard and frank they werent really sure what they wanted. then there was all the metaphores and how the charectors had to each figure out their roll especially frank at first it was hid roll with gerard but then it got deeper when they went to tour in europe. and he had to figure out what he was supposed to do to save the world. this whole story was like the climax of a book. it was so well written that it doesnt seem like a fanfiction but like a published book. i felt like i was there experencing the whole thing every raw emotion every ounce of pain. i could see the surroundings feel them even. it was incredible. sometimes i got so into it i would have an astma attack almost and have to llok around and make sure i was still safe in my room. every word was filled with detail every sentance a story in itself. from begining to end it was incredible. and then at the end when gerard was dead. i was hurt as much as frankie, then god. im atheist and now im starting to doubt my beliefes. the most incredible story i have ever read this is the longest review i have ever written and it still doesnt seem long enough to describe how i felt about this story. it will be on my mind for years. you are the best author i have ever had the pleasure to read a peice from better than any formally published stories. i look foward to reading more of your incredible work.this story made me wonder and think beyond my mind it was truly amazing. i loved it.
Author's responseJeez, dear lord woman, I could not have asked for a more heart-felt review. I appreciate this so much, I don't even thing you know. I'm very very happy that I was able to place such an effect on you. I hope you keep reading, and much love -xo
(#) GunSlingerGirl 2007-05-08F*CK. i love you. i love your writing. that was brilliant. i cannot believe it. i think i read it so fast wanting to know what happened i didn't quite get all of it. but i do that with all your stories. i cannot begin to explain how amazing this story is. i really can't. i think with your permission i should like to print it off and make it all book-like. as a once off. maybe i'll make 2 and send one to you??? i dunno. it would be a small token of gratitude for this. IT IS EXCELLENT.
this story...makes my head spin. makes me short of breath. truly it does. you are amazing and i should hope to see an actual book published later maybe? i really hope so :D
thank you again.
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-05-08OHpauseMYpauseFUCKINGpauseGOD.stares
first of all, thank you. Thank you for writing this. everything makes like perfectly sense now, all the metaphors and poemlines and prophecys, all make sense. And i was hell of a sceptical if you could make it with all that stuff, but FUCK dude. you really fucking did it. everytime i read this, it was like watching a movie or tv or reading a book or something, i didn't feel like reading fanfiction. Fics are hiiigly underrated, 'cause this story is fucking perfect. I must say, you are one of the best writers ive ever read any stuff from. seriosly, like how you write bout Franks emotions, you fucking make them alive, ALIIIIIVE. it feels real, it doesnt stay just as astory, it becomes like...more? and the bond between Gerard and Frank, MY GOD.stares again im totally out of words here, if i read this rewiev later, ill find hundreds of thins to say about this more. the last chapters here, i cried. tears like fucking flew out of my eyes and i ran around to get som etissue so i wouldn't get my white top all stained with mascara-stained tears but fuck that, i didnt find any and then i came running back to read this. DUDE. you have one hell of a mind you know? 'cause you can't be average-minded when you come up with stuff like this. I loved the part where 'God', if it was god, i think it was, but only you know for sure so, anyways who EVER it was, i loved the part where the 'good' came. Fuck, who am i kidding; i love every friggin sentence that theres is in this story. yells You are unbelievable.realises that she yells and lowers her voice I hope you write some more stuff in the future!huge thank you dude,xox hugs
(i typed so fast that i forgot to click spacebar every once in a while and then it was a killer to read it again.) ANYWAY, THANKYOU. hugtackles
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