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A Sixth Year Story: Voldemort's Return brings in the International Confederation and a team from the North American Wizarding Confederation to take control. In this chapter, Harry and Luna find ea...
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To the Rescue
(#) kelwin 2011-08-05
i think this chapter is a bit rushed. harry and luna go from friends that are not very close to exchanging letters to talking about maybe going out with each other to full blown kissing and holding hands in not much time. i think you should have stretched it a bit as it would have made more sense after all harry had just he liked cho because of quidich and she had nice legs and luna has a nice bum but that to me is very shallow. other than that it was a good chapter if a bit rushed. i would have liked a bit more detail.
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