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To the Rescue
(#) jabarber69 2007-05-14
Cool two chapters and I was wrong it was Luna and Hermione sunbathing nude not Ginny! Cool dreamscape (did you base this off of the movie Dreamscape with Dennis Quaid, Kate Capshaw)Author's response
Nope, I never saw it.
"T"To the Rescue
(#) kelwin 2011-08-06
this is really not real. like the go from not really knowing each other to maybe liking each othother to now sleeping and almost sex you may as well get it over and done just to get it out of the way. they must be the fastes couple. and all that with the girls kissing. it is just moving super fast and they men just go allong with it. you make them seam like very shallow men just to do what the wimen say without any argument at all. i just don't think a normal will just do what ever a girl asks for or demands without objecting at all. maybe in a females fantasy where they get there own way in everything but not in the real world. other than that the fic is good but rushing things just takes away and not adds to the fic.
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