Just what is Voldemort doing with Harry's parents? Why doesn't anyone care that Neville's are missing too? What's Harry going to do about it? What in the world is Narcissa doing to save Charlie?...
Excellent update, as always. Revenant was the word? Should make things interesting for poor Harry, but I'm actually finding Narcissa's misadventures to be the most interesting, and not just because she tricked a veela into a gangbang.
Eh. The villain raising the dead hero's mother.
How corny. I thought you a better author than to use something so... trite.
Pince's comment seemed a bit out of place. No one is supposed to enter the Forbidden Forest (despite the detention there in Book 1), but students may enter the Restricted section with permission. Doesn't she seem to get that backwards?
'Arithmetically, it was a significant day' -- shouldn't that be 'arithmantically.' Wizards study Arithmancy, not Arithmetic, don't they?
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