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Train In Vain
4 reviewsmy shitty computer decided to go bizerk on me, making me write this whole chapter again
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Flourescent Adolescent
(#) cnharp 2007-05-19
wow! i really love this story so far. I can't wait for you to get more out. i'm excited to see where you take it. Keep up the amazing work and update soon!!!Flourescent Adolescent
(#) AlexSanDee 2007-05-19
Love it Love it Love it....I also love how you pay attention to details like a passport. Makes the story so much more real!Flourescent Adolescent
(#) xxMyPainfulRomancexx 2008-06-10
She didn't even realize that she was crying until she felt the first tear fall down her cheek and onto his chest. She knew he must have felt it to when his hand stroked her hair.
"What's wrong?" he whispered.
She thought about denying that there was anything wrong but decided against it in the end. He already knew everything else. He might as well know this too.
"Tonight, when you found me at the quarry, I was going to jump," it came out very softly.
"I know," he responded.
"How?"
"I've been there."
omg sooooooooooo sad i fucking cried.....
xxkelli-kayxx
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