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Sable and ivory
(#) BloodyLove 2007-05-23
Oh my god. I was reading it and that woman showed up and I was thinking 'Damn it! She's going to make everything crazy'. But then she left and I was releaved. Then you pull another whammy on me. I was reading the end and thinking 'Oh no she's going to have to marry one of these guys and that's going to make everything crazy'. However it could be a good thing. It could get Yuffie and Vincent to come closer because they realize they like each other or something. It definatly shouldn't be love yet that would be corny. Just a lustful attration. That sounds right for this point of the story. I love the fact that Vincent was touching Yuffie on the leg after that woman left. See other love factors for them make them want each other. But please don't throw in too many other possiblities. I don't think I'd be able to handle the scare. Just Vincent and Yuffie all the way.
Of course I reviewed each chapter. I felt like I should and also because I wish I found this when you first started it so I would have been there from the beginning but alas I wasn't. Well anyways please update soon.Author's response
Hehehe... I like happy endings! hint hint
Thanks again for reviewing! ;)Sable and ivory
(#) Faeriegirl 2007-05-25
OMFG TSENG! HAHA didn't see that one coming... I love the way she was noticing all the similarities between him and Vincent and then she has to marry him... I like the way you portray Vincent as slightly full of himself, it suits him, but its not a aspect of his character that many people think about, the same with his past BEFORE Lucretia. So yea, keep going :)
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