- Awesome. I love the light, almost self-deprecating tone of the narrator. Sometimes the frequent breaking of the fourth wall got a little annoying (such as when Kurapika talked directly to the narrator), but very funny overall. You did a great job converting canon to AU. Kuroro's extremely formal style of speech amused me, and his frequent threats to beat his assailants with books. My favorite was when Kuroro noted that Hisoka was clearly larger than the thicket he'd popped out of - reminded me of when Kurapika pointed out that Buhara had clearly eaten more than his own body mass.
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