KakaIru. From friends to lovers and all that's in between
That was really good. I love your ending lines.
This was quite beautiful. I was swept along with them and could relate to the heartbreak and pain. You timed it well, making it real and believable. You brought me to tears, both in sadness for both of them, and then in happiness at the end. Well done!
I loved this story. It made me cry in parts, it was so fantastic. I can't wait to read the rest of your stuff.
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