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Chapter One
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Innocence Eternal
(#) Cerediwen 2007-06-04
Am I constructive? laughs Well you normally get pretty long reviews! But yeah, that was cool! But I think, just to make this constructive XP, you could have added a little more description and a little less/more spaced ut speech. Just an idea XD But yeah apart from that it was awesome, nice one girl! But update some MCR fics!!!
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