(#) overdog001 2012-05-11Very good story, with plenty of good bashing in the right places.
Sadly, I must say, fire your betas. All of them. I have read your "uncorrected" Dutch-English stories on various sites, and your beta people actually make it worse.
I see you pulled your stories from fanfiction dot net, but not sure what the reason was. Would you mind sharing your reason?
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