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Chapter 3
10 reviewsThe theme of the story is anger, but not the anger of Harry, but the anger of everyone around him. Payments are going to be made by those who wronged Harry in his short life. Dark!Powerful!Harry wi...
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The Destruction of Hogwarts
(#) Maverick512000 2007-06-22
I must admit I'm not normally a fan of your work but this story was really very good. I like the way you write Daphne and look forward to reading future stories where she is paired with Harry.Author's response
Thank you. It took some time before I understood what readers like to read.The Destruction of Hogwarts
(#) spedclass 2007-06-22
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!The Destruction of Hogwarts
(#) burnunit4 2007-06-23
I was hoping to see Harry's war with the goblins and the ministry... oh well.The Destruction of Hogwarts
(#) vasilis01 2007-06-23
I loved it.
I'm already reading The Heritage and its very nice and original. What about your other stories?The Destruction of Hogwarts
(#) sweetgirl 2007-06-23
I loved the story, but felt like the ending was incomplete. It kind of left me hanging. I hope you write another or add another chapter to this. This was a very funny story.The Destruction of Hogwarts
(#) Madrikor 2007-06-24
yes yes i know english is probobly not your first language in fact it is not mine either.
but that inly works on myabe the first five works of fiction you write. if after that you still write exactly the same way or in some cases of the text worse, then when you started out... well it makes you wonder dosnt it
i know alot of people that would say that your works are good and to a point i agree with them. but i really think most of your stories are partialy or mostly ruined by the extreme errors founds in parts of the texts.
please please get a beta reader or someone who has either english asa collage mayor or has it as a first language and can spell check and do grammar checks for you becouse its in fact painfull for me to try and read your works.
im sure if you askaround you can find several intrested and willing people who can help you.
hope to see improvment soonThe Destruction of Hogwarts
(#) Wolfric 2007-06-25
I like it. This story is certainly one of the best super Harry revenge stories I have read. Thanks for writing. WThe Destruction of Hogwarts
(#) alerin 2008-06-11
I like it. This story is certainly one of the best super Harry revenge stories I have read. Thanks for writing. hopefully you plan on updating soon.The Destruction of Hogwarts
(#) ToddGilliss 2015-12-30
time to come back and continue on with this challenging story
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