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The Two of Us.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-06-25
Hell Yeah First review and how much do I love Samantha!??
I couldn't believe how incredible the last part of this chapter was. You say that I'm a good author??? Well I don't even touch on the style that this chapter had.
You.
Are.
Wonderful.
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thank you so much, you always make my life with your reviews. they make me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
The Two of Us.
(#) Melim 2007-06-27
Okay, so review number 2. As I've said, this story is amazing. You know that I'm in love with with this story and every new chapter is like opening a new present on Christmas.Author's response
yay for 2!
and i like christmas as do you, so you saying that makes me happy.The Two of Us.
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-02
First: "it is not ok to spy on girls in-between pasta boxes" absolutely rocked me. Thebest, so much the best that it has to be all one word.
Next up, I love his shopping list. That is too cute. And the blonde with braces made me smile. I don't know why, just precious, I suppose.
And! Their conversation at the end is wonderful. I've always wanted to have that kind of conversation, because I'm like that [not able to adequately express anything] but I can never find anyone as awkward as I am to talk to.
This is great.The Two of Us.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-09-10
OK, sooo, as soon as I read the 'promise you won't fall in love with me' line, I thought 'oh my god, she has cancer!!!' Yup. Then I found it even more amusing that you went on to mention 'A Walk to Remember'. Though, I must say I've never seen the movie, I just read the book.
Anyway... I loved how you made Patrick keep runing into her all over the place and creepily staring at her through the isle. But, you know, that's much more difficult to do in real life because so many shelves have that metal thing inbetween them.
Ok, now I sound like I've done that before.
Well, I loved it. I already love artsy Samantha, and Patrick for being so nervous. I think I really just love how you always make Patrick. So completely adorable.
Fantastic as always. I'm going to read more (either at home or after I get more super fun scanning finished)!!! Love ya.
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