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• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Zorathena 2007-07-04

  This is hell good! It is flaming hot, it is burning this site down! You rock!

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) DavidMPotter 2007-07-04

  I loved your Crabb and Goyle... I also love how Harry came to be back in time.
  I so look forward to more of this fic

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Cateagle 2007-07-04

  chuckle Oh, this is developing as a thoroughly enjoyable "re-do" story. This Harry knows that he needs to divert the timeline to have any chance of preventing Tom's success, so he's really -not- going to care how much he meddles. This should make for exciting and entertaining times for all involved; well, Tom and Albus may disagree, along with some disgruntled Death Eaters who are discommoded by -this- Harry's actions.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Tian87 2007-10-10

  I've only read the first chapter but it sound good. i like ur use of chacters.i can't wait to read more!
  

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) rahulahl 2007-12-21

  just started reading the story, but you gotta make things more in line with cannon. for example , quote : "AVADA KEDAVRA!" yelled another Death Eater but Harry managed to throw himself on the ground and the spell sliced a tree in half crudely. Harry pulled his wand out and quickly used an unlocking charm to open the shack he was heading to. After stepping inside, Harry stepped inside, sealing the door shut before putting up a light anti-Apparition Ward that would only hold the Death Eaters for a few moments.
  Avada Kedavra does not physically splice things or people.Unless they do in your story, it doesent even leave a scratch on the body. Kinda hard to imagine it splicing an entire tree.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) biged78 2008-04-13

  Good start.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) selenepotter 2008-06-28

  I started this before, but the chapters were so long I was hesitatnt to start them. I'm trying again.

• A Twisted Timeline

  (#) Dragen 2008-07-01

  Great start mate, I do like how Harry greeted Voldy so cheerfully.
  
  Harry took it well when he found out that he was sent to the past. I do like that Harry could do wandless magic. I do like how Harry handled his uncle and aunt.
  
  I like what happened with the Goblin and how Harry got the blueprints for Azkaban, Hogwarts and Ministry of Magic.

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