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Changing Hearts, And Eyes
1 reviewDraco's dating the girl that Ron just can't keep his eyes off. And her eyes are just one part of her that's complicated...
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Changing Hearts, And Eyes
(#) arkayz 2005-12-13
very interesting and cool plot. just some places there should be a comma not a full stop. Correct: "I am a cat," he said. Incorrect: "I am a cat." He said.
Author\'s Response: Thanks for that, i never really understood that whole comma or full stop thing...and you're the first to take notice of my misuse or the punctuation. Thanks for taking the time to read my story..
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