Bullet proof loneliness at best.
(#) Melim 2007-07-08
It goes Dun do Doobie do...that's the only way to describe any beat, I've decided that right now. And Samantha is still amazing..."What's a gym class hero?"
Gabe was justr edible in this chappie. Alex, I really love the care you take with this story to pace the dialogue and set the atmosphere just perfectly. It's true, you just get better and better and better. Proud to be a partner in crime with you.
How you manage such amazing characters is beyond me. Every story of yours is fresh and amazing! This is no exception. You've crafted, yet again, another wonderful story. I love it. I can not wait for more!
He then realized suddenly that though Pete was secure in his jacket that he was still out in the open... I can so see that happening.
I love how much junk Andrew talks. Pete's so mommy-ing Patrick. And Pete trying to get Samantha in the sack... hilarious.
Dun do doobie do brought me to hysterics.
And the end gave me hope!
I did not, however, like how Pete kept saying that "girls like that" don't fall for "guys like Patrick." Jerk. Patrick's conducting the sexy train over here.
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