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• Her better half

  (#) riaryder 2007-07-09

  You killed off the dog?
  You evil woman, you ;-)
  Mega-exciting chapter. This stalker chick is seriously deranged. And the way you write Pete makes it seem like he too is going slightly mad. Nice work.

  Author's response

  Well, I've always considered myself more of a cat person. ;)
  Thank you very much! That means a lot coming from somebody as talented (and with such good taste ;) ) as you.

• Her better half

  (#) angel_of_madness 2007-07-09

  oh no not hemmy!
  If I were Pete I would have been on my way to an insane assylum by now, poor guy.
  I hope this phebe girl is found soon, cause I really really don't like her.
  You have a nack for stopping just when it gets really interesting, can't wait for the next chapter.

  Author's response

  Right. Let's just say he's can take somewhat more than other people due to the stress that naturally comes with stardom.
  Phebe will be found soon and the story will be over. ;)
  Thank you. I know this can sometimes annoy readers (like me) but I think I like writing cliff-hangers. Also, thanks for taking the time ro review! :)

• Her better half

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-07-10

  Holy freakin Alabama. That's harsh times. Hemmy? Dude....
  
  I gagged a little, but only cos I'm a bit gippy with dogs.
  
  superb chapter.

  Author's response

  Blame Phoebe. Ah, Phebe. Thank you. Superb review, too!

• Her better half

  (#) peterpandacomplex 2007-07-10

  Hemmy!! How could someone do that to a dog... or even an animal in general? I will miss him and I'm glad Moe is back.

  Author's response

  Some minds are sick, and Phebe is actually very poor individual. She has only her mind.
  Thank you, Moe will be alright.

• Her better half

  (#) moocow 2007-07-10

  I SAID TO KILL PETE! NOT THE FUCKING DOGGGGGG
  
  -cries-

  Author's response

  But the cows are fine!

• Her better half

  (#) LOVELA 2007-07-10

  Yeah...I am seriously starting to like my idea of the totally sick and twisted plot that I feel this story should take...but one may never know...you and I may be on the same page. Scary...I know.

  Author's response

  Before you know it, you will be dancing to... nevermind...

• Her better half

  (#) FreakOfNature 2007-07-11

  Not Hemmy! Poor little puppy....Loved the chapter except for the dog slaying part.lol. more soon please. i must know what happends.

  Author's response

  Sorry & thank you. ;) I'll try to update today.

• Her better half

  (#) fob4ever 2007-07-12

  awww!! omgosh.....the dog.....died... :(
  cries in a corner

  Author's response

  Unfortunately, he knew too much. I'm sorry. :I

• Her better half

  (#) XTinkerbellX 2007-07-12

  I totally did not see that coming.
  Kinda wierd,but I cried a little bit.
  I mean come on,its Hemingway.I love this story so much though so its okay.
  ;)

  Author's response

  I know. I am horrible. And to top it off, not only did I have the dog killed because it's in line with the story and its development but also to get more reviews. Figured nice people would be shocked. ;)

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