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Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) rainydaykid13 2007-07-11
Oh my god, that really sucks.
Poor Patrick.
His Dad's an idiot.
I'm glad he has Allie.
This story never ceases to amaze me, you're doing such a great job on it.
I can't wait for more.
--xo MandaLook For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) lonerstreet 2007-07-12
Such a great chapter. Allie is such a good friend of takeing good care of him. Patrick's father is an ass for doing that to him. he should brun in hell.Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-15
Patrick's dad is a jackslap. I want to gut him like a fish.
That very last line was beautiful. I love double entendres, and that one was the best.Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) bloodyvalentine 2008-10-31
awwwwwwwwwwwwwz
i love this chapter...its amazing
other thn its sad....
awwz poor poor patwick
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