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• A smile can change everything

  (#) tragicWithACapital_T 2007-07-11

  heyy, i'm liking so far :)
  
  POOR FRANKIE!
  you can put another character in there named Emily, she'd gladly date Frank ;)
  
  i like the story but i keep getting confused about how you say stuff like:
  
  "You looked at Gerard and blushed." (for example even though I don't think it's in the story.)
  
  it's just easier to read something when YOU're not the character... like:
  
  "I looked at Gerard and blushed."
  or
  "Carrie looked at Gerard and blushed."
  
  idk, i just found it odd how you wrote "YOU"
  
  otherwise great story! loving the plot. poor merch girl! haha
  thinks to self- must become a merch girl

• A smile can change everything

  (#) little_miss_screamo 2007-07-11

  i heart you
  i truly do :D

• A smile can change everything

  (#) xmiss_Bx 2007-07-12

  Poor Frankie, but I like this alot...its a great story.

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