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... into the fire
15 reviewsPete meets Phebe for the first time; it's time to come and get him. Dr. Morley finds the answer and Kirsh makes a bad, bad mistake. And the readers find out who Phebe is. ;)
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Her better half
(#) angel_of_madness 2007-07-13
wow I definately didn't see that one coming. Very nice XD.
I think I voted for the stick in mental hospital, so I don't feel bad about causing his death. I still hope he doesn't die though.
That is really harsh though I mean he killed Hemmy, that's sick.
Can't wait for the last chapter :)Author's response
Thanks for the review!
Yeah, Phebe is mentally sick. Obviously her host is too but she's seriously deranged so it's not really her fault in some way... At least not in my book. Of course, that doesn't bring back Hemmy.Her better half
(#) whatkatydid 2007-07-16
Sorry I read and totes didn't be a good wife and review. I was so happy to read this, I'll tell you my first suspicions were back when he blacked out with Moe. The reason for me not saying, it showed me what an awesome writer you are because I still had my doubts. It was so skillfully written.
Well done my Dear.
Plonk?Author's response
I was giving my best. Thank you for those wonderful words, wife. :)
Barman, a pint of plonk, pronto.Her better half
(#) riaryder 2007-07-19
Seriously, well done.
I only guessed with the little hints in the last chapter. Up until then, it hadn't even crossed my mind.
Excitement galore!!Author's response
Wanted to plant some hints but kinda decent ones. Thank you.
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