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HARRY POTTER AND THE FIRST YEAR (working title only)
3 reviewsWARNING! THE AUTHOR IS SUFFERING FROM A VERY FOUL MOOD DUE TO ESSENTIALLY TWO WEEKS AWAY FROM THE COMPUTER WHILE THE RELATIVE FROM HADES WAS IN TOWN AND ENSCONCED IN THE SPARE BEDROOM (WHICH HOUSES...
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HARRY POTTER AND THE FIRST YEAR (working title only)
(#) Xadro 2008-02-08
I like the story, you detail alot and well i like it and its original, i hope you continue with this story and at least add the Tri-Wizard Tournament
8/10
- XadroHARRY POTTER AND THE FIRST YEAR (working title only)
(#) LeprechaunJV 2008-02-21
Interesting story. Looking forward to it being updated.HARRY POTTER AND THE FIRST YEAR (working title only)
(#) martindeshade 2008-09-13
Its a very moving story.
However it really needs a very good editor to condense certain sections, and split some of the very long paragraphs. You have to realize that very long paragraphs is hard to read especially on a computer. I find I have to highlight with the mouse every other 5 lines on a 10+ line paragraph.
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