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Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) fobgal1 2007-07-16
Woah.
Allies dad needs to die!!!!!!!!!!
I cant believe he almost killed Patrick.
And I hope everythings works out for them in California.
Please update soon.Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) rainydaykid13 2007-07-16
Well Allie's dad is quite the asshole, isn't he?
I'm just glad Patrick's Ok.
Good thing they're leaving, Patrick's dad can't hurt him anymore and Allie's dad can't... be dumb anymore. :]
I can't wait for more of this, it's rad to the max.
--xo MandaLook For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) MidnightBlue 2007-07-16
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Yay! I love this story.
I laughed when they tied Allie's dad up in the closet. Lol.
Great story!Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) FreakOfNature 2007-07-16
Dude, i just started reading this story and i love it. Poor Patrick, its so sad. please update soon.Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-17
Ohhh you're the bastard. She's not here.
Wonderful. Good for Pete, standing up for his friends.
And screw her dad, I'm so mad at him. I hate people like that.
I've always wanted to run away. I'm jealous jealous jealous.
This chapter was excellent. I love that they stuffed him in a closet, and I lovelovelove how supportive her mom was. Good deal.
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