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Potter's Resistance 1: Breaking Ties
(#) twilliams1797 2006-04-09
wow... at last a story with new ideas, not the same old cliches' that so many writers use. anarchia indeed!! When Harry makes his move against Dd using info from anarchia, will Dd recognise the source of information.. it almost looks like the primary reasoning from the book is right in line with both the end aims of both HP and Rookwood. To be left alone without interference. Can Harry and Rookwood come to an understanding? looks like he has a lot of knowledge Harry can use..
language. even though the writer is not primarily an english speaker I find few faults with the use of language, in fact most of the errors I see have more to do with spellcheckers than language.
This story has moved to the very top of my favorites list, and I look forward to the updates.
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(#) snowman 2006-04-20
Awsome story so far. Update soon pretty please?Potter's Resistance 1: Breaking Ties
(#) schuster333 2019-07-30
Was all that necessary? It did little to advance the narrative, and, considering that the chapters end soon, doesn't set up anything in the future narrative either. One could feel your pride of authorship seeping through, but this remains an aside and a waste of the reader's time.
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