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Through the Eyes of the Fly on the Wall
3 reviewsAndy thinks he's found the girl he's been dreaming of!
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Through the Eyes of the Fly on the Wall
(#) Tian87 2007-10-07
i thought your story was really good.
i dont want to offend anyone so i
wont say any thing else.[im blonde so whatever comes out of my mouth usualy makes people mad:)]Author's response
thanks!
but i really want to know what you think! very few things offend me!Through the Eyes of the Fly on the Wall
(#) Tian87 2007-10-09
GRRRGRRR
i have to reread it now becuase i cant refiggen member what happened because i was half asleep when i read it!but iremember that it was really good!so right now i cant stay up till like 4 in the morning reading it because i have practice tomorrow 8am-4pm yup sounds like fun. but any way you have some typos, but they are still understandable, and i liked how you used your real name. most people would think that would make them seam to full of themselves. Also you have a good description of your character.
Mind you i have only gotten through 2 chapter for the second time[gggrrr:)]
PERSONAL!:what instument do you play?Author's response
i know i have alot of spelling errors in it!! my spelling is crap-tastic!
i played the Flute!Through the Eyes of the Fly on the Wall
(#) Tian87 2007-10-09
'nother personal thing, what kind of band are you in?Author's response
i was in the marching/concert band in HS! if that's what you're talking about?
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