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you can keep my brother
(#) hopeanne 2007-08-18
AAAhh! I dont know how I missed so many chaps. I guess the alerts thing isnt working and I was like I wonder why shes not updating and I come and look (even though Im not suppose to be on here-lol) And surprise surprise look what I missed!!! So this is like a 3 in 1 review.
I loved it. They got married! thats awesome. (In the last chap your spell check is funky. Its a 'veil' not a wail! lol. And chips? Is that like fries? (I get confused easily- are they eating potatoe chips or french fries?) (not like that affects the story-Im just wondering)
Okay but story wise I love it. I love the whole 'turning the order bit' Who says you cant have dessert before dinner or get married and then engaged!Author's response
lol sorry about my spelling, i'll fix it.
as for the chips, i guess what they ate were french fries but we're just calling them chips over here so...
glad you liked it, i wasn't sure it's going to end well, you know, but i did it anyway, haha i love having dessert before dinner...on second thought i just love the dessert without the dinner :)you can keep my brother
(#) hopeanne 2007-08-18
These review boxes are kinda choppy or else I just have a bad wi-fi signal, but anyway... continuing on- I dont think it was too cheesy. I mean theyre still drunk right? And the guilt part is great cause it could go so many ways from here! Mikeys gonna be pissed when he finds out. They all are. Theres no way that this can end good and I just love it!!! Misery, pain, heartache! I just love it! =Pyou can keep my brother
(#) SaaRawr 2007-08-19
Two Words..
Fucking Awesome (:Author's response
2 little word yet they mean so much to a needy writer (lol at my dramatic phase again)...what i'm trying to say is thanks!
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