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Of All the Bad Things That Have Ever Happened to Me, This is By Far the Most Recent
4 reviewsHarry/Lily/Petunia (Yes, you read that right.) Harry has a confrontation with the Dark Lord, and his life is turned upside down.
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Harry Potter and the Long Road Home
(#) Parselmaster 2006-03-08
I really like the bit with Dumbledores Diary, I found it refreshing and interesting. Everything else I found average.Harry Potter and the Long Road Home
(#) Dragen 2006-11-21
What an intresting start, I can't wait to see what happens next.Harry Potter and the Long Road Home
(#) Rocky235 2007-09-09
Oh boy! What to say? First the bad.
This was soooo grim. Fourty screaming children stuck on the wall. All of the assault team about to be cut down in a dank stone building. (I'm sure you're a nice person, but really...)
Now the good.
You write really well. No typos, good grammar, and dialog that reads easy and natural. The sentence structure was varied and nothing read in a sing-song manor.
Albus selling out Harry in such a way and the castle scene were unique.
Powerful stuff!
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