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Dragon's Dance.
(#) JunoMagic 2006-02-10
The first two chapters of the story introduce the hero, a child, at the time when a war starts in the country. In this war not only men are fighting, but dragons.
It's hard to tell from the first two chapters how the story will shape up. So far the style is smooth and flowing, and the plot is clear and realistic in its fantasy setting.
However, in both chapters the reader mainly gets "told" about everything, there's not much "show". Everything is related from a perspective somewhere in the distant future, and therefore the story does not become really "real". I don't find myself drawn into the story.
Nevertheless this is definitely a story that I will keep watching for updates.
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