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• The Roaring Snake

  (#) PerfesserN 2007-08-14

  I think the whole purpose of fan fiction is to sit back and imagine, "what if?" One of my favorite genres is the HP re-written with a healthy dose of "what if?"
  This story has potential, keep it up!
  N!

• The Roaring Snake

  (#) Wonderbee31 2007-08-14

  I like this idea a lot, and the idea of maybe seeing Harry paired with an unconventional character, like Millicent is really appealing to me, and I hope to see how things might go with the two of them, it'd be nice to see her character increased from the female Goyle clone she seems to be in canon.

• The Roaring Snake

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-08-14

  This story definitely has a lot of potential. I like what I've seen so far, and I especially like what you said you have planned in your author's note.
  
  I hope you can fix the quotation mark problem before the next chapter. It could be that you've got smart quotes enabled in word, but I'm not sure.
  
  Looking forward to more.

• The Roaring Snake

  (#) Nautilus 2007-08-14

  Slytherin specimen is not one of the parents of Millicent, YET, Milly's parents might not need to be slytherin, do they?
  
  otherwise i wouldn't be surprised to see the Tonks family, Hestia, even Naricassa to some extent. How about madam bones and the patels... also other possibilities, where harry could make strong loyal and 'true' friends...
  
  the stuff with dumbles, does make u wonder about the weasleys, and even, what kind of 'influence' he (dumbles) has over the DE. i mean, he could at various times pressure (politically, magically, etc), which may force the DEs to act in certain ways...
  
  also, i like the fact, that voldy, just doesn't want to kill harry, but also understand why he was defeat those many yrs ago...
  
  i look forward to see how you explain that... something which JK and other Fanfic authors have not been able to do...
  
  i have mentioned a lot of things, but truely, at the moment, i am excited to see where u take this.. especially with ALL the major actors actually doign things...
  
  congrats

• The Roaring Snake

  (#) DavidMPotter 2007-08-15

  I enjoyed the little bit that was here. I look forward to reading more.

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