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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-09-13
ooooh this is goood
its building up...
feel the suspence lol
its a great fic - if not overly complicated sometimes
but its the twists and turns and complications that keep it interesting
im enjoying it thoroughly
update soon pleaseThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Shaggy37 2007-09-19
Outstanding story so far!!!! I loved every chapter especially the chapter with Black Castle in it. I was wondering if it took you a while to come up with such a detailed description of the castle? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) Shaggy37 2007-09-19
Outstanding story so far!!!! I loved every chapter especially the chapter with Black Castle in it. I was wondering if it took you a while to come up with such a detailed description of the castle? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)Author's response
Thank you.
For the description I tried to come up with a design for a castle that would actually act as a castle rather than just a fancy building like Hogwarts, Beauxbatons or the Chateau Delacour.
So I based it off all the best bits of castles I could think of, so double walls means double protection, one higher than the other means people on the second wall can fire over the first easier, the large gatehouse with gates and portcullises , death holes(I think thats what they are called) etc means it is even harder to enter and if you do you are likely not to make it into the inside walls, the keep in the centre is so that there are actually places to live in the castle. You see where I am going, all the best bits of castles that would fit together, thought I admit the gate house was a bit off an after thought, the hardest bit was making all the living rooms of the different houses look different.
Keep reading and reviewing
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(#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-09-27
Outstanding story, I am enjoying it very much.
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(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-09-28
The way that this ended seems to have been a bad place to do it. Please update soon.
Geovanni Luciano
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