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dont leave me down and out
(#) Crimsonsorrow 2007-09-13
wow i've totally missed you, you realize that and i still hope that you didnt forget about the ray thing. But anywho loved the lyrics they were awesome and update soonish please i will give you chocolatedont leave me down and out
(#) Crimsonsorrow 2007-09-13
it's been forever since you updated i'm glad you did keep on going please and i loved the lyrics as well. i'll give you chocolate if you keep on updating
Author's response
thanks the lyrics arent my fav but w/e and dont worry i didnt forget about ray im just taking my time on progressing the story but you are gonna be a main charector like soon. im writing the next chap now. just for my favorite reviewer you!dont leave me down and out
(#) little_miss_screamo 2007-09-13
you keep putting yourself in the story instead of kayley
heheheheAuthor's response
huh? i put it in first person pov so i say i instead of being in 3rd and saying kayley if thats what you mean but im kinda not sure what you meandont leave me down and out
(#) MCRFreak 2007-09-14
Yo Ive been reading ur story since the beginning and I luv it. Awesome. 4 dat question u asked in the last chapter I think u should make Kayley and her band go on tour with my chem. :)dont leave me down and out
(#) getxupxmoshxkid 2007-09-28
i love this story.
seriously good.
update soon and i'll give you skittles and chocolate.
&& little miss screamo means you say nikki instead of kayley.
(L)dont leave me down and out
(#) icey_blues 2007-10-11
YAY, three cheers for me, I caught up with the story!!!
I love it, and for the question you asked I think kayley's band should go on tour with my chem
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