- Im sooo disapointed... I followed your story from the very begin in "vampires" the end was confusing but whatever and this one was rediculously confusing but still well written and then you just end it like that? Nothing had anything to do with anything. I couldnt find the plot line and I tried so hard to. I dont even know how this story ended becase I didnt understand it at all. Its just nothing seemed to connect to itself and I dunno. Its well written and I tried to get it but so much was going on and I just felt like you lost the story line. Also it ended so ubruptly. Where are they? Hows Frank? Hows Gerard? Did he ever get the blood from the rope to make Frank better did he ever get better wheres mMikey were are they? Whats going on with everything else. Theres so many lose ends. I enjoyed reading and your an amazing writer, but Im just so dispointed with the way this story turned out. Im sorry. But please continue writing I will continue reading. Its not that it was bad just all over the place and I love your writing so please dont take this as an insult I'm just trying to be honest.
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