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Luna's Hubby
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-10-03
Great update, I especially liked the fake Yule Ball gossip and the revamped second task.Luna's Hubby
(#) DrT 2007-10-03
Good solid chapter, a new take on what's been so often done before. I also liked the take on the Yule Ball and its aftermath.
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(#) musikant 2007-10-03
As expected, a great new chapter in the ongoing saga. I like how you've made Fred & George's pranking into one more piece of foreshadowing that Harry Lovegood will soon be exposed as Harry Potter. Nice weaving of canon and original in the reworking of the second task. I would have enjoyed more detail on the secondary characters at the Ball.Luna's Hubby
(#) musikant 2007-10-03
As expected, a great new chapter in the ongoing saga. I like how you've made Fred & George's pranking into one more piece of foreshadowing that Harry Lovegood will soon be exposed as Harry Potter. Nice weaving of canon and original in the reworking of the second task. I would have enjoyed more detail on the secondary characters at the Ball.Luna's Hubby
(#) Ascania 2007-10-06
Nice story marred by one glaring error in the latest chapter. You can not tell a pregnancy the next morning after intercourse. It takes at least five days until a fertilised zygote settles in the uterus.
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