So, why is Artemis still at St. Barleby's anyway?
This was a really good story. I liked how you used the 'you' thing to involve the reader in the story. And the characterization was spot on.
The only problem that I noticed was that you spelled 'Nobel' (as in Alfred Nobel) as 'Noble'.
I thought it was absolutly wonderful, I hope to read more of your works in the future.
yeah how about an update as the story ist not completed?
I'd love to read on
Wow. this is one cool story.
I liked it, but I truly can't imagine Artemis Fowl ever letting his guard down like that. You made him seem like he was 10 or younger. Nevertheless, it WAS insightful.
Wow. I've never read a fic quite like that one before. I like it!
Interesting use of 2nd-person perspective.
Wow. I love it :) I agree with Horsie890 a bit. I doubt he would have been that unguarded with anyone not willing to drink the same poison. But it was insightful nonetheless
(#) Hechu 2011-12-11
I agree with horsie890 as I don't believe that Artemis would ever let his guard down. Then again we all can't be perfect even when we're geniuses. Artemis does have a weaker side he just hides it very well. I like how you made us we his history professor. it was interesting to read. I like the plot and it gives us an idea about Artemis. Interesting.
I like the part about "blood money"
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