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The Acts Of Betrayal
17 reviewsThe Semiclassic 'everyone has been lying to Harry about everything' plot. Very AU. Bashing of pretty much everyone. Mind Control Sex. Language. Dumbledore decides the Old Families won't tolerate th...
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The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) DtH4ever 2008-04-18
finally a new chap^^
in my opinion your best story, so contiue plz.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) daled73 2008-04-20
Another good Chapter. I don't know why this site does not allow me to rte a story, even signed in, but if it did this would be another "5".The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) SmokinDragon 2008-05-09
Just found and read the entire story (boring day at work :D). Excellent work though I must admit reading through the rape-parts where harder than I thought (kudos for that, as writing it well enough to elicit such an unexpected emotional response from me takes good penmanship, as I normally read through such parts as emotionally detached as I can make myself given the utterly despicable acts portrayed).
Other than that, it has a multitude of characterizations and plot-devices I find interesting in HP fanfic, such as Ron/Ginny/Molly/Dumbledore bashing (Ron's a git, never liked Ginny, Molly is irritating, and Dumbledore just seems so manipulative and/or senile in Canon), manipulative/evil!Dumbledore, evil!Snape and evil!Draco (I have trouble coping with the 'reformed' or 'misunderstood' versions that some fics try), independent!Harry, powerful!Harry (but not super-powered or with a multitude of weird superpowers), a Harry/Neville friendship to replace the Harry/Ron, Luna as a seer, etc.
Suffice to say that its easily in my top 10 HP fanfics. A truly excellent story that kept my attention chapter after chapter.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) daled73 2008-07-09
I was very pleased with this story, even though I have encountered people of the opposite pursuasion. I think you had some very original twists on some ltherwise cliched events, and a very original ending.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) NobleK 2015-05-25
Read this again just now and liked it so much I downloaded the MOBI from AO3. Thanks!!The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) Mistress_of_Potions 2016-09-07
The rape parts were a bit unpleasant to read, but fit the story very well. Although Ron was a rat bastard in this story, I appreciated the heroism at the end and the look at what he could have been. Rather sad, really.
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