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At Midnight When Tears Fall
3 reviewswrote it a year ago.had nothing else to do.about a girl named lila and a guy named hayden who discovered that midnight was the time tears fell.
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At Midnight When Tears Fall
(#) cke-banb 2005-11-26
I absolutely LOVE this story. You did an amazing job building up characters, and the ending literally made me say "Wow," out loud. Amazing work, and I hope to read more of your stuff!
Keep it up!
If it isn't too much trouble for you, please read our story and let us know what you think. Thanks a lot!At Midnight When Tears Fall
(#) KoraLuv 2006-03-10
i loved your story, over all it was very well writen. i did not like the way the sentences are spaced out, and some are a little hard to read. but other then that i loved itAt Midnight When Tears Fall
(#) emotionless-crystal 2006-10-16
Your story would be interesting. Note the word would but your story does not excite nor does it draw a reader to read.
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