(#) xxACoalminexx 2007-12-11I adored it. It made me laugh at places and go, "awww" at places and everything!! Great job.
Oh except one thing kinda threw me off, 'He didn’t think loving someone of the same gender was any different than having feelings for someone of the same gender'. You said the same thing twice. I think. Or maybe I'm just dumb. Could you clear that up a bit for me?
Author's responseGah! Youre right. Sorry. Yeah, I need to pay attention more. I'll fix it. It's supposed to be "Same gender...different gender". Thanks for catching that!
- awwwww!!!! once again you've done it!!! absolutely LOVED it!! particularly loved the line about him hating his laugh, "He wanted to stab it in the face and castrate it with a wooden spoon" bahahahaaa!!!!! GENUIS!
i also really liked how you captured franks appearance, how he always kinda looks sleep, and his smile...it was really really well written. great job!!
(#) Emo_musik_chick 2009-02-03I, like, screamed. Seriously, screamed.
And...thank you. I stopped crying when I read this. It made me feel much, much better.
That was fabulous. I ADORED that line about wooden spoon castration, but the best was the last line. I AWWWWWed quite loudly at that.
Is Stockholm over? Just outta curiousity? Because that truly is my favorite story ever. I just wasn't sure if you'd finished it. The last line of chapter ten seemed reasonably...ending, but I didn't know.
Anyway, rock on. -Albi
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-10-18Pretty cool, I guess. No, that's not true.
I absolutely luff how you got the important moods out, like erm.. Gerard's nervousness? I dunno how to explain it exactly, but I felt the emotions :) If that even makes sense.. Once again, I just woke up.
And I also read your About Me thing, and I completely agree with what you think about Waycest XD I don't think they'd mind if people wrote about Ferard, but I think they'd seriously hate all the Waycest :)
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thats all i can say it was just so sweet and i loved gerards nervousness XD just tooo tooooo cute :)
i really love it :p
this is defo going in my faves.
fab job :) it was hot and cute and lovely and....
well i could go on lol
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