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Ariadne is in trouble, at seventeen, her father's dying, she has a kingdom in her hands and no prospective husbands. What's a girl to do? This was an exercise in college, I was required to pu...
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Beauty, Honor and Glory : A Modern Fairytale
(#) MarkPoa 2006-04-14
Given the limitations of this story (it being a college project), I was actually interested by the tikbalang's treachery in the first half. Unfortunately, I thought the ending could have used more work... it just sort of ended. Jarring, to say the least, particularly since you had that scene with Carson. Maybe I was expecting a happier ending or something... but it just felt sudden.
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