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Ok. Now I do believe in good karma
(#) RyanRossLuver 2007-12-20
This is good...keep with the long chapters and write moreAuthor's response
thanks :)
some people don't want long chapters but i'll see what i can do
keep reading xOk. Now I do believe in good karma
(#) skylinesXturnstiles 2007-12-20
I love this!
Okay, so maybe with the next chapter go back to longer chapters, they have more stuff in them and turn out better.
oh, and this is just a suggestion, but unless you had a really good idea for something to happen before she leaves, maybe jump forward to her arriving.
anyways, i love this!! add to it soon please!!!!Author's response
oh yeah actually thats a really good idea thanks x
keep reading ! x
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