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‘Well… You’re friends caused this explosion…’ Joe passed Patrick a broom, ‘So for today butthole, you are the fall out boy’ ‘Pardon me?’ I snorted
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I Only Think In The Form Of Crunching Numbers___x
(#) kitkatpwl 2007-12-26
sooo good! as always! ;) haha
im so excited for when they get home!!! hahaha i was like, "nooo joe!!!" when he asked them for band practice!! damn!!
please update soon!
cheers!Author's response
They totally just need to sit down and talk! =3 They've been dating a grand total of one day and they've hardly seen each other =] Hehe That's the problem with trying to have like a thousand plot lines in a first person view story xI Only Think In The Form Of Crunching Numbers___x
(#) girlinthemoon 2007-12-26
Pete and Patrick need some alone time!
This is really cute and I think each chapter gets better and better.
Please update soon.Author's response
I'm, like, obsessed with cuteness =] After a serious chapter I really need some fluff to calm it down or I start crying =3 xI Only Think In The Form Of Crunching Numbers___x
(#) redballoon 2007-12-26
Adorabubble?!
I think that is the only word that can describe the Pete/Patrick relationship. I really like how you're treating it like a real one, and they're not just jumping all over each other for sex every three minutes! it makes it so much more believable...and cuter.
Can't wait for your next update!Author's response
Confession One: Sex scenes scare me a little =3 Hehe
Confession Two: There will be at least one.. eventually
=]
Usually with stories I'm quite impatient with the relationships in them but with this one I've decided to have several relationships moving at different speeds. It's realer that way xI Only Think In The Form Of Crunching Numbers___x
(#) redballoon 2007-12-26
although....i do agree with kat and girlinthemoon....they do need some alone time soon ;)Author's response
They will get some alone time because for both of them there are still some secrets left in their pasts. Such as:
1: Pete's Parents
2: Pete / Ash relationship
3: Patrick's Parents
4: Dwayne
...etc.. hehe
xI Only Think In The Form Of Crunching Numbers___x
(#) i_heart_cliches 2007-12-27
I just started reading this today, and I just have to say that I'm completely hooked! Normally I don't like slash as much b/c of what others have said: unrealistic relationships and rushed sex scenes. But you write soooo well. I love it completely.
I can't wait for more! Your writing is amazing :]
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