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Luna's Hubby
(#) Cateagle 2007-12-27
Tch, poor Snape, he now owes the Potters two life debts; that' gotta hurt majorly. Good chapter, but the following one should be quite "colorful" when it's realized that Harry Lovegood = Harry Potter.Luna's Hubby
(#) Innortal 2007-12-27
LOL, and thus the ruse ends. Can't wait to see the chaos when the Boy Who Lived returns to the light.Luna's Hubby
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-12-27
That was absolutely brilliant. I loved Dumbledore and Fudge's differing levels of blindness, but Harry's actions are what really made this chapter for me.
I don't know if I've already said this, but his animagus form was a GREAT choice.Luna's Hubby
(#) hbush9 2007-12-28
Excellent story. Never dragged and really funny plot twist. I hope that there will be at least one more chapter because the last chapter left a lot hanging.Luna's Hubby
(#) DrT 2007-12-28
A fun chapter; loved Harry the rhino. And I had to laugh at Dumbles staying so dumb til the end!
"T"Luna's Hubby
(#) dogbertcarroll 2008-01-14
Nice work. I'm surprised Harry getting cut didn't set off the arm band and port him to the healers, but then their man on the inside probably warned them about it.Luna's Hubby
(#) slickrcbd 2008-01-14
This is an excellent story, and it's been one of my favorites. That was a great ending point, though I sort of expected an epilogue that shows the wedding, as well as if Harry Potter ever comes out of hiding.
That being said, I do have one minor nit-pick about one line.
"Avada Kedavra," he said, pointing at Cedric. Harry pushed the Hufflepuff away from him and the spell's path. Cedric fell onto the cup, and both disappeared.
When I first read this line, I thought that both Cedric and Harry were portkeyed to safety, not Cedric and the cup. I'm not the only person who thought that.Luna's Hubby
(#) druikin 2008-07-23
Great chapter, I like how the tasks are slightly different and not just retellings of the books like most other fics. I also like how Harry is good, but not super strong, fast, omnicient, omnipotent, and good with a sword too. Though I have to say I do like Super!Harry fics :/
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