(#) Disenchanted 2007-12-29Fuck, you've done it. I think you've managed to create the PERFECT chapter. The way you described all the emotions, and just the whole awkwardness of the situation... that's amazing. This is my favorite chapter so far, I'm sure of it.
I love your story so much...I wanna like... marry it or something. Sorry, if that sounds creepy but just...wow...more soon?
(#) crystalcrash 2007-12-29This chapter was really good. Excellent. I loved the whole fight, and then the scene in the car... perfect, really.
I read your profile page because i wanted to add you as one of my favorite authors, so i just thought i'd add a random comment that has nothing to do with the story: i love your hair! And the pics of Gee and Frankie are gorgeous.
Update soon and we'll love you more
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