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The big beautiful box.

by InuKag 2 reviews

once there was agirl.. who lived in a big beautiful box. and everyone adores her in this box. she cant escape the cameras gaze on the surface.. shes happy.. but inside.. she wonders if theres mo...

Category: Drama - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006-01-22 - Updated: 2006-01-23 - 278 words - Complete

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This is a story about a girl...
she lives in a box, a big beautiful box.
and everyone adores her in this box.
she cant escape the cameras gaze
on the surface.. shes happy.. but inside.. she wonders if theres more to life than the box.
so one day.. she wanders out from the box.. into a world shes never seen before.. full of feeelings that shes never felt before... pain sorrow.. stuff shes always just....pretended wasnt there
as she walks down the streets of the broken little town.. she glances in the reflection on the side of the building
the beautiful gilr she once was is tattered and torn.. makeup all running.. hair a ratted mess...
she stops for a moment... mostly in a state of shock at what she is seeing
her cloths are caked in dirt, and her arms are covered in cuts
past the building she sees the boxed world she came from...
she goes to the structure thinking she can just go back

but she soon discoveres there is no way.
all she can do is stare into the life she so desperatly wants to live again.
with all the shadows on this world she has entered... where true feelings are sheltered, and hopes arent so shattered.
suddenly she sees that inside the box.. the atmosphere has changed as well... people are no longer laughing and having a good time.. but... crying
after a while the girl realizes, that by leaving the box, she left life, however sheltered it was it was damn better than all that surrounded her, but she could never go simply because... in that world.. she has died.
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