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• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-01-05

  Good part here, and hope that Sirius is made to grow up here, and liked the way you had Harry interact with Hermione here, and going to be fun to see what happens because of tis, along with what changes may come from Ginny and her talking with the diary.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) Meteoricshipyards 2008-01-05

  I wasn't expecting the complexity in the magic Harry used against Draco. And I can see Harry and Hermione having fun with it.
  
  But Ginny -- there's a recipe for disaster; her anger and jealousy could make her a willing host for Riddle.
  
  Thanks for the story. Very enjoyable.
  
  Tom A.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) MrPowell 2008-01-05

  well it seems that Harry has charmed the whole community. I look forward to more.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) pstibbons 2008-01-06

  Thanks for the update. One gets the impression that Ron and Ginny will soon drift away as close friends of Harry.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) Cateagle 2008-01-07

  Hmm, it seems that Ficwad ate my first review. I rather enjoyed this chapter and watching the way Harry & Hermione's relationship grows deeper and more intimate. I wonder who's more annoyed by this, Ginny who's lusted after "The Boy-Who-Lived" or Ron who finds he's no longer Harry's best friend and certainly not his closet along with his jealousy over Harry having developed his abilities extensively over the summer.
  
  The subtle use of Parselmagic on Draco was a beautiful touch and 'twill be interesting to see how long it lasts and just what it covers. If it lasts the rest of their time at Hogwarts and covers both Harry & Hermione under any conditions, Draco could be in for a rather bad time (-snicker- especially in Quidditch against Gryffindor ;D).
  
  As far as Ginny goes, this version of her seems upset enough to be a much easier host for Tom. Ah, well, Illia iacta est and I'd wager that the ods on her coming out alive and with her magical abilities intact have dropped considerably.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) dogbertcarroll 2008-01-13

  "How did you get through his shell?" Jason asked Harry.
  
  "I kicked him in the balls three times," Harry admitted.
  
  LOL! Yeah, that's one way to batter down some walls.
  
  Great chapter. Love the Invisibility to Malfoy spell.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) brad 2008-01-14

  Harry kissed Hermione, yay!!
  
  Interesting slant on Sirius; I guess he is a bit tetched/crazy from his lengthy incarceration.
  
  "Weasleys are the envious sort" - and that's pure canon. Ron's jealousy is well known, and - whatever people may think of the Ginny we saw in HBP (who was an aggressive ill-mannered artificial character, in my opinion) it's a matter of record that several appearances she made in DH was accompanied with jealousy of other girls attracting Harry - Gabrielle and Cho.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) Dragen 2008-04-07

  I like that this is going to be Harry/Hermione are you going to add Luna and make it Harry/Hermione/Luna - I really hope you do mate, as I would like it. I like what Harry did to Draco. :D

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