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More Equal than Others
4 reviewsBella and Remus help Odin, Theo looks into Majik Most Darke and Greg Goyle has talent
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Bella Rising
(#) DrT 2008-01-08
Go Greg! And way to keep the subplots moving
"T"Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, and for the encouraging words. I wanted to show Goyle in a more sympathetic light. Really enjoying "When Vernon Didn't Miss."Bella Rising
(#) selenepotter 2008-01-08
Great Chapter!
Why is Z interested in the children. Is he planning to kill them or requite them?
More Please!
Author's response
Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing.
Zabini believes that all the pureblood children will flock to his banner. And as for those who don't. . .
N!Bella Rising
(#) AmberDragonfly 2008-01-10
Oh man, when Greg started singing to calm the "sprogs" I got a lump in my throat. Beautifully written scene! Can you share the tune somehow? Some of us aren't familiar with children's songs in the U.K.Bella Rising
(#) GuitarGurl 2008-01-15
Gotta Ditto Amber, I got all misty when Greg (when did he become "Greg" and not just "Goyle"?) started singing.
Please write more like this!
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